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I hear that the clavicle fairy
is building a castle out of
our necks and shoulders.

This pendulum toandfro is getting old.
hearts hang from
collar marrow
and they strike arthritis dust
out of the surrounding hills
they bleed ink out of greasy sunsets
too many clenched fists
and I always hold my breath.

(I hear that the clavicle fairy
is building towers out of dental floss and fishing line
she's digging moats and filling them with perspiration.)

I hear the clavicle fairy
is building a castle out of
bones and boulders.
Our necks and shoulders.

the way your jawbone writhes
underneath your skin,
like something secret,
something buried.
©2006-2008 ~wukurd
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I think you know the feeling.
Daily Deviation, 2006-08-12

Daily DeviationBones and Boulders by ~wukurd adopts the common idea of the tooth fairy for use in a solid poem. (Featured by `PoeticWar)

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~ledbypassion:iconledbypassion: Jul 20, 2006, 1:20:23 PM
i can't really explain why...but i LOVE this. it definitely deserves a fave.
~hinderedlove:iconhinderedlove: Aug 1, 2006, 3:41:21 AM
I liked it so I favd it!

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~wukurd:iconwukurd: Aug 1, 2006, 12:40:57 PM
thank you :)

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~NinjaKitteh:iconNinjaKitteh: Aug 12, 2006, 12:02:13 AM
wow :| this is one of the best written pieces ive ever read, thank you!

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~sukkiGoh:iconsukkiGoh: Aug 12, 2006, 12:06:17 AM
i think each and everyone has a feeling like this at some point or the other..
~DaKitty25:iconDaKitty25: Aug 12, 2006, 12:07:16 AM Mood: Sadness
Wow, Something about this piece. Perhaps the details. The words you chose. Either way, most definitly deserving of a fav.
~clickypenpixieXstock:iconclickypenpixieXstock: Aug 12, 2006, 12:14:15 AM
love :)

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~STFUSnowWhitexo:iconSTFUSnowWhitexo: Aug 12, 2006, 12:50:59 AM
No words... but this is brilliant! :heart:
~nr137:iconnr137: Aug 12, 2006, 1:04:16 AM
nope. never felt it.

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*jade-pandora:iconjade-pandora: Aug 12, 2006, 1:10:03 AM
Intriguingly written, well done, and congratulations!

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